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Alessio Monzavi
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134921Released 1y ago100% Free**Original Sentence:** "Some families want to raise and manage their children within their own rules. They set strict rules and discipline their children throughout their educational lives. They want them to go to the best universities and have the best jobs. While they think they are doing these for the good of their children, when they go to extremes, they put pressure on their children. This causes stress on their children. For example, when a child takes an exam, he thinks not about the exam but about his family's reaction if he gets a low score." **Corrected Sentence:** "Some families want to raise and manage their children within their own rules. They set strict rules and discipline their children throughout their educational lives. They want them to go to the best universities and have the best jobs. While they think they are doing these for the good of their children, when they go to extremes, they put pressure on their children. This causes stress on their children. For example, when a child takes an exam, they think not about the exam but about their family's reaction if they get a low score." **Grammar Problem:** In the original sentence, the pronoun "he" is used to refer to the child taking the exam. However, the pronoun "he" is singular and masculine, which may not accurately represent the gender of the child. The corrected sentence uses the pronoun "they" instead, which is a gender-neutral singular pronoun that can refer to any child, regardless of gender. This is more inclusive and avoids making assumptions about the child's gender.
