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Write this text 150 words shorter for me, just don't touch its structure and make the content more compact: "My primary reason for choosing this specialty is my fear of driving, which stems from an incident 10 years ago in which my cousin was killed in a car accident. This event deeply saddened me, and I wished that no one would lose their life in a car accident. Upon discovering this transportation specialization. I hope to make even a contribution to the field of transportation to prevent others from experiencing the loss of a loved one due to accidents. I collaborated with a team on green concrete, I worked on a concrete design mix. I also worked with a special type of plaster used in historical buildings but it has a problem of quick setting time, we improved the fresh mixture characteristics by using polymer additives to improve the mixture properties for both the fresh and hardened state. My team and I went to an Innovation and Technology Exhibition (RINOTEX) in an attempt to locate sponsors for the equipment and money we needed to continue our research, and we were successful. This accomplishment during the COVID-19 pandemic is indicative of our dedication to and proficiency in the research. Recognizing the level of support and resources available, I am confident that, as a highly creative student, I can conduct excellent research during my doctoral studies at this university. Being someone who never limits themselves, I believe that by being at this university, I can leverage my ideas to conduct impactful research in the field of transportation engineering during my doctoral studies. I am committed to fostering positive relationships with all professors, establishing strong connections, and collaborating on outstanding research projects not only within the university but also with professors from other institutions. This collaborative approach will enable me to make significant contributions to the University of Minnesota in transportation engineering."

My primary reason for choosing this specialty is my fear of driving, which stems from an incident 10 years ago in which my cousin was killed in a car accident. This event deeply saddened me, and I wished that no one would lose their life in a car accident. Upon discovering this transportation specialization. I hope to make even a contribution to the field of transportation to prevent others from experiencing the loss of a loved one due to accidents. I collaborated with a team on green concrete, I worked on a concrete design mix. I also worked with a special type of plaster used in historical buildings but it has a problem of quick setting time, we improved the fresh mixture characteristics by using polymer additives to improve the mixture properties for both the fresh and hardened state. My team and I went to an Innovation and Technology Exhibition (RINOTEX) in an attempt to locate sponsors for the equipment and money we needed to continue our research, and we were successful. This accomplishment during the COVID-19 pandemic is indicative of our dedication to and proficiency in the research. Recognizing the level of support and resources available, I am confident that, as a highly creative student, I can conduct excellent research during my doctoral studies at this university. Being someone who never limits themselves, I believe that by being at this university, I can leverage my ideas to conduct impactful research in the field of transportation engineering during my doctoral studies. I am committed to fostering positive relationships with all professors, establishing strong connections, and collaborating on outstanding research projects not only within the university but also with professors from other institutions. This collaborative approach will enable me to make significant contributions to the University of Minnesota in transportation engineering.